Suggestion and Feedback, Please? (2nd DEMO)

So I just updated my game and released the 2nd DEMO of my game: Hidden Fractures
I planned to upload the 1st DEMO on my recently-made blog though (y4t5ur0.blogspot.com), to show the differences for anyone who would like to.
Anyway, the link:
http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/ox0tb2korkkyobufgjb7dq/hidden-fractures-2nd-demo-updated

I have to admit, there are some features that I planned to have implemented by the 2nd DEMO but then I didn't get to...
Please give any suggestion or feedback, though this game isn't completed yet >_<

I've been really impatient to release a second demo, so I'm open to any suggestions to improve my game!

Thanks!~~~


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