a dark story of survival by kainvaneck

Review by mem1100

Not a bad concept for an adventure, but there's not really any common sense to any of the choices, and as I mentioned in the comments, it's difficult to tell what's going on with the horrible grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Typos are forgivable, but this story lacks basic writing skills. Perhaps if you took a little more time to proofread, or have a friend proofread it, and put a little more thought into the story, you could turn it into something workable.