pretty interesting, but a little unpolished - there were a few mistakes and spelling errors, and it doesn't really seem to be written with the choices in mind (eg. i chose to stay with the bounty hunter at one point but when everyone was saying what had happened, the bounty hunter told a version of events where i wasn't there and then didn't believe my story)
Great fun! It held my interest all the way through - unheard of, especially as reading the white-on-black really messed with my eyes.
I'm clearly not cut out to be a private investigator, thought I'd spotted the killer and felt I was being so clever, and was wrong. :D Can't bring myself to replay now that I know. That's probably the thing wrong with this, that actually matters.
There are lots of spelling mistakes and things that look like "note to self" which shouldn't have been visible to the reader/player. But they didn't spoil it for me. Good writing, great sense of place and the characters didn't get muddled in my mind. I'd read a novel or story/ies by Tia Orisney, and I will go and find her other games that reviewers mention. Thanks for this one!
Pretty good, it's hard to find a good mystery and this one kept me guessing right up to the last few scenes. I liked the other two stories by this author better though.
I've read And then there was none, and it's as good as the other one, except this is better. There the killer pretended to die, so it was easier to kill, but here, the killer is with us all the time!
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