All in all, really good. A few patchy spots here and there, but generally a really good consistant story line and good senario. Played it a few times through. Easy to play, easy to understand and short. No one likes games like this that run forever :)
Only played it a few times, there's a couple errors where the game doesn't continue, personally I feel like you could wait a little longer for some of the game overs, other than that I'd say it's rather good from what I've played, keep me updated.
Overall, it works well. However, there were points where the narration jumps from 3rd person to 1st person.
There are a few spelling mistakes throughout it too.
There are also a couple of points where the description feels off or like it could have been worded better, but apart from that it is all good.