Very good, I enjoyed playing it. Like the previous person in the review I want to point out that there are grammar mistakes. But the overall presentation is great. I also can't wait for round two!
short, but really good! You don't expect the outcome of an action, and the idea is really cool! there are a few(read: a lot, but I don't want to seem harsh) grammatical or spelling errors, but mostly "to" instead of "too" or a missed comma, or an unnecessary runoff sentence, but as stated before, really good! I can't wait for round 2!