You signed up for the United Space Exploration Federation in the hopes that you would be one of the proud few chosen to head a colonization mission to Alpha Centauri Six. When the rosters were announced and your name was on it for crewman aboard the U.S.E.F. Intrepid, you did not think even the cryogenic sleep chambers would calm you down. You are about to embark on a life a excitement and adventure!
Looks good. Good concept. Appears to have promise. There appear to be many things mentioned that cannot be examined or seen. Shower mentioned, then you see no such thing. Look in mirror is a missed chance . You peer back bleary eyed through a long unkept beard would be better than. You see nothing of interest.
Keep going! It’s good.