So in this narrative, I had to write an interactive story for my Year 7 English assignment, and here it is. We had to take a stimulus image and turn it into a story. Basically, a kid named Connor gets sucked into a painting and has to find his way out. He is faced with many moral decisions throughout the story and they impact the overall outcome of the story.
Well, if I was your teacher, I'd give you an A! A good story(line), interesting concept, good grammar, and a nice way of capturing your player's attention for a good amount of time. I like how this was executed. :)