Legacy Player: The "Play online" link above uses the new Quest Viva WebPlayer, which is currently in Beta. In case of issues,
you can try the old WebPlayer.
The Walking Dead, as written by Robert Kirkman's 3 year old child. This is just unplayable.
Also, I'm not sure what country you studied in, but that is not how you write speech.
"You: Hey, my girl. You going to school?"
This is halfway between a transcript and an illiterate ape writing a novel. It's either:
You: Hey, my girl...
OR
"Hey, my girl..." you say/said.
The "you" does not go in the speech marks, and if you're using speech marks, you do not put in the colon.