The Stranger Inside by RedtagGamer

You wake up in the middle of the night to strange noises. Now the story begins.
02 Nov 2018
Writing was a bit shoddy and stereotypical as far as horror goes, but the sound effects certainly add some atmosphere and make it a fun little distraction. Ill be looking forward to part 2.

Review Bauer
31 Oct 2018
spooky... scary... but sadly no skelingtons 3 stars.

Review DefaltGaming
31 Oct 2018
Pretty good game enjoyed it until the end cant wait for chapter two, despite the few mistakes in spelling and missing quotation marks it was a solid story that makes me wonder how your gonna expand.

Review anorak1477
21 Oct 2018
The Sound effects made the story way more interesting.
I would enjoy a chapter 2.

Review Forgewright
14 Oct 2018
A good read with sound effects. If you like a short story give it a run.

Comment Forgewright
14 Oct 2018
I noticed this is a story with a hyper link to continue each paragraph. No choices to make. However, the change of music with each section made it a fun read. It only took about five minutes and was satisfying when finished. Of course, I am a fan of short stories and I could read more of these. Good work!

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