wings of fire by Flutterthea

Review by PetalGatekeeper4020

I don't see this as a game and the writing's really poor. I did like the concept, but why was it only one page?

Review by Ro_Mac

It was okay. I liked the romance.💘💋
All the other reviews were so mean.🙁🙁

Review by Thunder the Forrio Fox

This is trash. Why did you make this.

Review by lostspirit

Ok, I'm gonna be nice and rate this a 5 star. Anyways heres some crit. Maybe try to make choices to what darkstalker or the person you're playing can do instead of writing down a whole script and make it more of a book than a game. You don't have to if you intend this to be a book. If this is a book maybe work on describing the surroundings and the looks of the characters. Anyways, that's all from me. Bye :)

Review by SilverStone the dragon

SERIOUSLY?!
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IT IS SO SHORT AND THE STORY IS INCREDIBLY BAD!!!!🙄

Review by LeafWingLizzy

Oh so very bad. Oh so very bad. Oh so very bad. Oh so very bad

Review by Sissirox

bad so boring