A Short Slice of Life Text Adventure/Gamebook.
You follow in the shoes of a not-so average teen. You suffer depression and are trying to get over it and to add onto the problems deeply in love with a girl from your school.
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It's okay.
It seems heavily inspired by Depression Quest, at least at the start. Whole lines were taken from said game.
The grammar is also iffy. Unless English is your second language, it's silly you didn't fix it, with auto-correct and all.
The story-line is chunky, I mean, you know exactly what will happen even if there is somewhat of a choice.
Anyway it's not a waste of time, if you're board you should totally give it a shot. I didn't give it 1 star. There are better games too. I would say this barely scratches the surface of depression though, this is a fun game, not an educational game. If you care about good writing in your game I wouldn't play it.
If I had to say one thing, author-Hexdro hammers ill-motivation as a symptom of Depression & not that well. And Depression is so much more then that. This game is not a good show of this debilitating illness. But author-Hexdro did stuff right, they should keep making games, and you should play this if you haven't anything to do.
Also someone else said they didn't really like the poem, me neither. Protagonist said they were REALLY good at poetry and I got excited, but it was kinda, really bad. Going into detail it was so shallow, nothing to think about, it had a limited vocabulary, it screamed 'a child-teen wrote this'. But you didn't ask so I'll stop.
This was absolutely fab! The story flowed and you felt engaged with the MC. The happy ending was very satisfying. Just because a story is short doesnt make it bad and in this case that really shows. Well done...
A more than decent text adventure. Personally, I related well to the protagonist. The choices actually felt like they mattered, despite there only really being two each page. Enjoyable length.
Why you do this *sniffs* (Tears of joy)
I'm actually crying to this thing. My First Favorite DEV!
My hands are shaking**
Please make more of this stuff**
WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE *Sniff*
T^T
(Cries in the corner)
Interesting game. The grammar isn't very good, though. And the storyline is a bit... flawed. But I do like it, just go through and edit the spelling / grammar next time.