Hotel de la reine by Book Lord

This is my second game, my first being Go Take a Walk, I hope you have fun!
PLEASE point out any errors or anything I need to add to the finished parts of the game to make it as good as possible. I have NOT finished and I would like some commentary on how I have done so far...
Thanks,
Book Lord

Legacy Player: The "Play online" link above uses the new Quest Viva WebPlayer, which is currently in Beta. In case of issues, you can try the old WebPlayer.