The Case by smcdon

A young girl finds a suitcase in an antique store, but she is unprepared for what it means for her future and her family.
Review by besasama
04 Mar 2018
The writing was good. I only found one editing error: a sentence that repeated itself. But I was disappointed in how little my decisions changed the story. The essentials of the plot, including the ending, are more or less the same regardless. So it felt a little fatalistic.
(4)

Log in to post a review or comment.
Similar Games

Airship Raider


transangelic exodus


Charolette the Hero Book


Dragons and Castles and Cheese, Oh My!


Scoundrel's Blood


Average rating
(4)
Written by
smcdon

Plays
1307
External Link
Published 28 Feb 2018


Support

Forums