The Spaceship I by pedrokws123

welcome to The Spaceship! this is my first made text adventure game and this is just a little beginning. i hope you like this smart beginning of a story!
There will be an part 2 of this.
there can be some bugs in the game, but it is just a beginning so don't hate please :)
Comment Io
15 Jun 2019
Some of the grammar is weird. Like "you are getting up"? Like, are we in the middle of getting up? Do we only have one leg out of the sheets but are about to have two?

Over all it's a good start, but could use a LOT of polish with regards to the text itself.

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