The Tale of Dragons by Babick01

Review SilverStone the dragon

This is an overall fun game. Well done. :)

Review Link6415

That was pretty good. But, you should redo it with less clicking, shorter descriptions, and a font/background color. It gets a 4.

Comment Link6415

Looks promising...

Comment James Alder

POSSIBLE SPOILER ALERTS

This was a really fun little journey. You've created a fantastically imaginative world, that makes sense with its own words and phrases to fit the way this world works. It was fun to play, could have been longer. And I feel like the first journey into Wolfwood was too short. Was a little lame that Fenrick, the great wolf, was just found in some cave with no journey to actually get to it and figure it out or anything. I felt like you could have explained something about the kid, son of Jagger, was led to the wolf cave. Maybe by evil spirits talking to him, or wolves chasing him into the cave, so that Fenrick could come back. Would have been better if you got to adventure through Wolfwood, find the kid's trail, then figure some things out inside the cave so that you can finally find the boy and awaken Fenrick.

Still, this was fun. If this was a test to see if people would respond positively to this world you've created, then I think it was worth it. I would definitely play more of the world of Nassia.

I really liked: I quote psalm 5:22 of the Book of Visitations: ' 'But how shalt thou protect us from the other trolls upon the hills?' asketh Kinnos. Spreading His wings, the Wyrm sayeth unto Kinnos, 'Let the petals of the red rose and the grains of salt act as mine fangs and mine fiery breath, instilling panic within all who would threaten thee.' ' "

^Thought it was really cool sounding.

Here are some things I spotted that you need to fix, though:

"Why would you think make a circle of rose petals and salt?" do you mean "why would you think to make a circle"?

burly bolnd man: do you mean blonde? bold? what?

"You want ride?" huh? do you mean "a ride" ?

ten storeys high: I think it is supposed to be ten stories high, not completely sure.

Vortgen hires another pair of donkeys: I thought his name was Vortger? You spelled his name wrong here.

The art was all pretty awesome, by the way. F