Warrior Cats: Part 1 by Warriorcats908

Review david8

its alright. its fun to play when im at school

Comment david8

woops meant to leave a review lol

Comment david8

Its alright...helps with bordem when i'm at school

Review preppy gurl1

nope do not play I would rather get shot in the head before playing this lol

Comment caraaaaaaaaaa

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comment Honeybee♡

Rq how do u make a text adventure like this? I'm confused when it says like room and player and script

Review DawnStar4

Its Purr-fect

Comment DawnStar4

The best warriors game I have ever played!!

Comment Poisonfang.nz

The links don't work... please help!

Comment dashfoox

amazing start, although they started called me dawn instead of fire after a little.

Review Dawnkit121

Omg, I love this. I found it online, and I already LOVE warrior cats. So, I made an account, and played part 1. I L-O-V-E-D IT!

Comment Aether303

Listen LUO TIGER, anything can be an RPG because RPGs are stories where you get to choose what happens, like in you imagination!

Review Aether303

This is an amazing story, and I would love to see more!

Review LUO TIGER

Boo! Where's the others? This is just a story! Not a RPG!!!

Comment LUO TIGER

Boo! Where's the others? This is just a story! Not a RPG!!!

Review Redfur100

I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!! And if you could kindly help me I don't know how you did the choose a person thing? Can you help?

Comment Sweet-buttercup-12345

I love the series! Can't wait for part 6!

Comment Ivypelt_Riverclan

sadly, it wont open..It might just be for me though

Comment FernStone

Hi I am a new cat here who would like you to read my story and tell me how you think of it and the link is right here!

http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/maojjgjufkylkipmpwxhfg/warrior-cats-thunderclan

I hope that You will comment your opinion and enjoy. Also I liked your entire story and think It was great. Could You give me some tips on how to make it better anyone?

Review Peril200000

I loved it! It was amazing, by far the best Warrior cats game I've played.

Review unicornauther

Amazing game

Review robinwhisper

awesome game

Review MemeMaster21

When you choose Firekit/Firepaw you still get the Dawnkit/Dawnpaw prophecy. But it's still really good other then that.

Comment WaterClan_Riverpaw

ye part 2 plz!

Comment WarriorCatz

Awesome! I love it! :D

Review derpydogdoge123

Is there a part 2 yet? 500000000000/50

Review lunar moon

yaaaaaaassssssssssss queen

Review Puppy_Playz

I wanted to give it a 10 there's no option, great game 10/10

Comment STORMalsoTHELIONGUARDGIRL1209

(i meant 5 stars)

Review STORMalsoTHELIONGUARDGIRL1209

.............0_0...........THIS.....IS......AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!and i love how i'll save the clan!!!!!keep up the good work plz and i hope you ok with the virus and such

Comment Moonwatcher

I loved it soooo much!!!

Comment IrisBlues32

...O-M-GOODNESS! WHERE'S PART TWO?

Review Mr.Puffy7

I am speechless... SO INSANELY GOOD!!!

Comment SquirrelFlight234

I can't wait for the next one! do your best! ;3

Comment Bramblekit0w0

It's great! I hope part 2 will come out soon-do u have any idea how loud I gasp when i saw this?-also, pls add romance!!!

Review FishiesUnite

AMAZING!! 😍
keep it up, I can't wait for part 2!

PLAY THIS GAME!!!!!!!

Comment Skyflare

This is AMAZINGGGGGG i cant wait to see the rest of the story,keep up the good work,i am also planning on making pictures for the three kits in the story along with the parents. :D

Review Wolfheart

Awesome job! Keep working on the next one.

Review Featherstrike

Very good detailing and story. Good job. keep going. you have a BRIGHT future ahead of you, Warriorcats908.

Review Shadow Fur

I think you did a great job, keep working on the next!

Comment Shadow Fur

I. LOVE. WARRIOR CATS.

Comment BottlecapJazz

Alright, if you want a prophecy, make it a PROPHECY, not just a bland outline of the story. Prophecies are meant to be odd, not simply stating who or what exactly but yet doing it at the same time.

What's the prophecy?
"Dawn will save the clan, with the help of a Bright spirit, and a Jay's determination."

Problem with this is that you are outlining Dawnkit, Brightkit, and Jaykit way too much. You know who is in the prophecy and it really isn't fun just "knowing."

Let's cut that out real quick.
"Dawn will save the clan, with the help of a bright spirit, and a jay's determination."

Still, anyone can figure out what "dawn," "bright," and "jay" are with ease. So let's change up the wording a bit.

"With the Sun's voyage of the skies leaves them phosphorescent. And as they climb and the strike of the winged makes due, harmony will sweep the dewy heaths"

With this, it still is possible to find that the prophecy speaks of Dawnkit, Brightkit, and Jaykit but it takes a bit more thinking. Now, I'll explain this prophecy a bit more.

"With the Sun's voyage of the skies," it's talking about "dawn" and how Dawnkit would need to possibly take a journey for help/wisdom/strength/understanding. "...leaves them phosphorescent," this is talking about "sunlight" and how Brightkit would help guide them to understand. "And as they climb," this is talking about how they will have to be ready for emotions to spread and heartache to appear. "... and the strike of the winged makes due," this is talking about when they finally destroy it and how Jaykit will possibly lead a fight or protects the clan. "... harmony will sweep through dewy heaths," harmony is of course peace but for those who have had their lives destroyed and brought down in the crying hearts, they may finally rest.

Remember, when making a prophecy, it's fun to think a

Comment Warriorcats908

I know I've been away for sooo long, but I've also started working on Part 2. It's still a WIP and I'm still thinking of other scenes. Anyways, here you go so you can check it out:

http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/avg7_2dcgewlbvpohv5clq/warrior-cats-part-2

Once you've played it, please give me some ideas for scenes in the comments or at least give me some more drama to add. Thx!

Review Detective

This is amazing! Could u review mine?
http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/ebbpc4jxweucq9v0ittrmw/moonlight-vs-spikers

its a WIP.

Comment scarly woods

I can't really delete my other comments but I was searching warrior cats and looked at this one again! when I said to search my game, I don't believe it works sooo uh here's the link but you can just ignore me -_-

http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/y0vydyz_yeotyn8ckpvo0w/warrior-cats-game-moonray-clan

Comment scarly woods

ha I forgot to tell you its called warrior cats game: moonray clan

Comment scarly woods

I'm currently writing a book myself, and I think yours is great. Maybe you can check mine out. Also, I wouldn't add a medicine cat option until your done with the warrior because often writers have so many choices they can't catch up so they try to do a bit of both, or finish one ending and its super short on the other. I would add two love choices but I wouldn't add too many or else it would be too hard to finish.( If you can't tell I hate it when there is no ending or its too short -_-'') I love it <3

Comment Misterfox

Also the thing that ottersplash said is really annoying so plz fix that

Review Misterfox

Great but if you choose to explore the camp with bramblekit you go to change your mind instead of explore the camp. So I be confused.

Review FoxCreates

It's great, but when it got to the part where they defeated the badger and everything after that, it said dawnkit, but I chose fire kit

Comment Warriorcats908

I have finally finished the first part of my series. I am making a plan on what I should add next to Part 2. Once I have a plan, I will start creating the Apprentice part. If you have any suggestions, put it here in the comments or reviews.

Comment Warriorcats908

I have finally finished the first part of my series. I am making a plan on what I should add next to Part 2. Once I have a plan, I will start creating the Apprentice part. If you have any suggestions, put it here in the comments.

Review Lovepaw

IF U DONT FINISH I WILL CRY. PLZ ADD ROMANCE TOO