This game is really compelling, the mix of Mystery, Horror, and Survival is all a superlative combination. Though there are spelling and grammar errors, the general concept and playthrough of the game is both entertaining and constraining. My favourite aspect is definitely how unique all the character’s are. They all have different and attributable aspects to their personalities, which makes you want to choose favourites depending on who you probably relate to the most. The only thing I would want to change from this is the quick progression of the game, and the long paragraphs. It would make the players more anticipating of what might happen next, since the progression is slower and it takes you to one place before taking you to the other. Add some commas, and fix some spelling errors, and the game would be better than it already is.