the best IFs are the ones that respect your choice and drag you into one direction, this game does that and you really feel in control of the character. Recommended.
CYOA games aren't really my kind of thing but it was refreshing to see one so well presented. I hope you continue with it and perhaps take your eye for the aesthetic over to parser style gaming.
This was a really funny game, and worth replaying to see all the different stories and how they come together. I enjoyed the sense of humor and movie references. Nice work!