luna at the moon by alora

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A short little game, its also my first, not a very good one, but i tried. i didnt know how to make it end, so your kinda lost in endless boredom. you play as luna when shes on the moon. next time i will understand more! have fun!
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Comment Destroyer2921
05 Jul 2020
Error at the start cant play because of it
Comment alora
24 Dec 2012
oh, by the way, khygann, shouldent you NOT use your real name? i mean, i know that my username is like my real name, but use common sense...
Comment alora
24 Dec 2012
thanks guys... i still need to put serious work into this...
Comment Jay Nabonne
24 Nov 2012
I think the best way to advance this is to figure out what you don't like, what you want to fix. Take each flaw at a time and work on it, and if you don' t know how to address it, ask in the forum. That way you'll get better as your game gets better..
Comment khygann
18 Nov 2012
don't worry alora I know that everybody has trouble making text games so good luck on any games you make in the future! (P.S. I don't know how to make a text adventure game so I'm impressed! by your work but then again I didn't play it yet but I will after I'm done writing this)
Comment alora
15 Nov 2012
please help me!! if i could make it better, i would. but i dont know how!!!
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alora
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Quest 5.2
English
Published 15 Nov 2012
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