zombie survival story #1 by Rampage_21

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this is my first text adventure so please don't judge to harshly. ok now for the real story, you and 2 others Eric and Ryan awake in an alley in what seems to be an abandoned town so you and your friends start to look around you realize that there is no one else in the entire town play to see what happens
Comment Earmuffs
05 Apr 2015
You have imagination (thumbs up) and vocabulary, so I'd recommend passing your texts through an auto-correct program for the touchy grammar. Might I also add, punctuation and capital letters help a story aesthetically. Good job so far! :)

Comment ryan77627
02 Feb 2015
OMG Zoidberg! LOL! :D

Comment Rampage_21
19 Jan 2015
Hope all of you like it but just so you know it's just a demo so thre isn't much at the time but I'm working on it when ever I have free time

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Added 19 Jan 2015
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