The Third Child's World by CadyBo

There were three children that each set off to create a new world, they were very hopeful and excited to weave an entire universe and create a masterpiece to be proud of.

A creation story that I wrote while feeling sort of appalled by humanity
So it is a little pesimistic
but its still a work im proud of.

-I kinda-sorta dont own the picture. It was originally two different pics that I photoshopped together, so my ownership is a little confusing.-

~C.B

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Review Wrenovator

19 Apr 2019

You clearly put a lot of effort into this, and it is well written, and I hate to give you a bad rating, but this is not a game.

The utter lack of choices is not why I'm on this site. If I wanted to read a story without choices I would go to a website where that was the purpose. I was very excited to play this story-game, and very disappointed when I realized it was a bait-and-switch.

Review Bachen

09 Nov 2018

Nice story! Very creative and with some kind of truth. Liked it too much.

Review flysquirrel775

20 Jun 2016

Nice story, and although it's not a game I think it's worth time reading. However, the background color was a little difficult for me to read.

Review ToastmasterLex

02 Aug 2015

It's a great story but it's really short and there aren't any actual options. I wouldn't call it a text adventure.

Comment AwesomeEpicNinja

10 Jul 2015

Why do we always hide from our mistakes?

Review Corelle

10 Jul 2015

Reading this I began to feel like I needed to hug you. It is incredible in all ways and is truly beautiful, thank you for creating it! :)

Review Jordan-Tanker

09 Apr 2015

Epic. I love it. This is the kind of story that would bring anyone to tears. It was sad, but still awesome.

Comment Angelblade

05 Mar 2015

It was a great story. Would have been cooler if there where some choices.

Review Ranique

29 Jan 2015

Good story!! sad but good. I was so close to tears!!! good story!! Can i suggest my sories?

Comment Iceflame14

23 Jan 2015

The thing is, our world isn't like that. there are so many more good things in the world than the bad. but the reason people see only the bad is due to the fact that for humanity, it's easier to remember the bad things that happened than the good. it was well written and a lovely story, but i don't believe our world is wrapped so tightly that only the bad things end up being left behind.

Review kirbymaster1

08 Dec 2014

The story, was flawless!

Review MexicanNinja

06 Jul 2014

This is a great and sad story and I like how they have to weave their worlds. I liked that and that's why I give this 5 great and golden stars! (I nearly started to cry at the end)