Nocturnal - Chapter Two by Austryker

Comment Something Moving Under The Bed

It's a shame this part is broken, since you went to the bother of writing Chapter One setting the mood for it and everything!
I hope it gets fixed at some point. A lot of your writing style's very good and makes the situation very tense, and it shows that you've imagined the situation very well in each scene -like hiding in the locker or sneaking past the man with the saw in in Chapter One!