Seems it would be a good story since I like Minecraft and I play it a lot. But you have very very very little story, don't post stuff with so little story like this. It looks like it would be a good Minecraft choosing book, but you have to pick certain choices or you cant go on. Hope you update a ton until you are done. I wish you best of luck in writing this story/interactive book. Can't wait til you get more of this done... :)