The Mansion of Succubi by blackfox18

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You are a rookie demonhunter on his first mission to stop a succubus from terrorizing a quaint small town. Good luck!
What you can expect:
Succubi
Vampires
GOR
Various Mind Control Effects
Sex Slaves
Anal
Blowjobs
Vaginal
69
Probably some other stuff I am forgetting

This is a fairly short adventure which is really my first foray into using the quest engine and mapping out a story. Much bigger and much better things to come!

Feedback is good! I may continue this series but I will definitely be editing and fixing any grammatical errors I find in this one. English is not my first language so please bear with me!


Edit: Feel free to tell your friends and share this on any forums that you may be a member of! The more traffic this gets the better I will be able to gauge community interest and improve my work. Thanks so much everyone! Enjoy!
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Review This Big Hush
05 Sep 2018
This is not bad, but...
The writing style is good, but it is littered with errors, flipping from past to present tense, missed capitals, etc. There are big jumps in the narrative getting from the hotel to the mansion where it feels like the author could not be bothered to do more, and places where you feel you should have been given a choice (eg to release the prisoners). Sudden death is a big thing (but is that deliberate, as they do involve length erotic descriptions?). You can incapacitate a vampiress, only to be corned by her 10 minutes later, which seems like a flaw in the game logic. I am guessing there are only around a dozen pages, and no good ending that I can find - in the sense of completing the mission.
Review KKO22
09 Jan 2018
Great stuff. Just seems raw. Would love a bigger and more defined sequel. Sex scenes could be longer. 9 out of 10.
Review Razieal
07 May 2017
I wish I had another couple endings, but that's not to say I didn't like the ones presented. Could use a once over or two for grammar and a couple typos, but other then that well done.
Comment AnonRoy
04 May 2017
I'm seeing a few errors here and there. Mainly little spelling errors. I also would try to avoid using the same word twice in one sentence, especially for nouns. There's a broken link on at least one page.

That in mind, sexy stuff. Polish it up a little and it'll be great.
Comment ontheblink
04 Mar 2017
If you could write up a scene where the guy gets tricked into sex, I think it'd be hot.
Thanks
Review ontheblink
04 Mar 2017
You did a great job coming up with a unique setting and story line.

My main complaint is that the sex scenes are too short. They should be 750-1000 words long.
The grammar could use a little polish, but its ok.

I hope to see more from you in the future.
Review Shotagonist
21 Feb 2017
Interesting writing, although with the Mind Control announcement I expected a bit more, the mind control aspects of this are just fail states. Also, one of the choices during the Vampire Encounter is unavailable for some reason.

Has some good potential.
Review InfiniteBB
10 Feb 2017
Really good, even if its a bit short
Review Arizona2000D
02 Feb 2017
GG would love again
Review leonbee239
31 Jan 2017
Really good I thought. I definitely wish it was longer though.
Comment blackfox18
31 Jan 2017
Comment below if there are any other things you'd like to see in either this game or the next! I'm currently working on a project containing monster girls and a few others!
Review jbellow239
31 Jan 2017
I'd give it ten stars if itd let me
Review tabithathiessen298
26 Jan 2017
Loved It! hope to see you create more.
Review Yolodazdaz
26 Jan 2017
keep up the good stuff
Review jdemps534
25 Jan 2017
I really enjoyed this one! My only complaints are that i wish it were longer and a little more polished, otherwise, a great first game! Especially considering English is not your first language! Thanks!
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Quest Gamebook 5.5
English
Published 30 Jan 2017
Updated 31 Jan 2017

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