Settler of the Wastes by joshua3

This is a relatively short demo. Would enjoy some feedback on structure, direction, and story line. Thanks! (I know the depth is..well shallow as of yet but it's a rough draft of a work in progress and my first attempt, judge accordingly)
12 Feb 2016
im to stupid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kill yourself pussy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comment DaNiX88
10 Mar 2015
You should also add "Fluffy" to the rat's names, add a message saying I drank the water from my water bottle, and make the composter disappear after giving it to Ronnie.

Comment DaNiX88
10 Mar 2015
It's a great start to what seems like a zombie apocalypse game. It was really straightforward, though you should make the tire iron disappear instead of just dropping it, unless you plan to only be able to carry one type of weapon at the same time. I'd advise against not being able to pick up the tire iron once it's dropped, since if someone decides to pick up and drop the tire iron before fighting they will be weaponless.

I think you should be able to talk to Devlin, Ronnie, and Isabella in order to complete the current objective, or use clear and simple verbs, because many people often only play using text as opposed to clicking the links. Needless to say, when I was stumped I resorted to clicking the links and found what word I needed to use from there.

Hope to see this game be completed! Am waiting for the update!

Review maffew
31 Dec 2013
Had a lot of fun playing, and like where the plot was heading. All though at times it was unclear what the game wanted me to do, for instance, I never realized that you could go inside from the yard, as nothing was mentioned about it.

Comment ManOfLegends
25 Aug 2013
How do I get out of the cellar? I took everything I can but I am still hungry so I can't get out.

Review Darkrider
12 Jul 2013
I thought it was a good game, but the verbs were questionable - see my comment - and then once I'd done the composter part there was nothing else to do.

What next?

Comment Darkrider
12 Jul 2013
Done everything (had to rely on walkthrough with door braces and the 'use' verb instead of 'put in' with composter).

Now what?

What are you meant to do after everything in walkthrough?

Review AlexThorland
08 Jul 2013
I think this was very interesting, and the structure was good. You were very concise but descriptive at the same time, which is something you should keep up. Overall I loved it and would like to see more from you!

Comment GreyOwl
30 Dec 2012
READ THIS PLEASE!!
walkthrough for the beginning:
open old toolbox. take hammer. take tire iron. take bottle. take lantern. kill rat. eat rat. up. take radio. open table. use hammer on braces. out. south. look at bird feeder. use bottle on water. in. open drawer. take knife. open bin. take peel. take core. take tops. take pie. take grounds. out. north. east. read note. e. attack bandit. take bat. take iron. north. ask devlin about work. northwest. give visa to ronnie. use peel on composter. use core on composter. use tops on composter. use pie on composter. use grounds on composter. give composter to ronnie. southeast. give pass to devlin.

You're on your own now.

Review Lucy3
18 Dec 2012
Can give my farm work visa to Ronnie :/

Review joshua9
26 Sep 2012
how did you make a enemy

Comment Jay Nabonne
15 Aug 2012
It has promise, but there were some things that felt too "specific".

First, I kept wanting to use things on other things. The way you have it is ok, but I had to learn that things were more "implicit". For example, in the beginning with the rat, I had the hammer and the tire iron, and I knew I had to kill the rat. But I couldn't use either. Finally, I just said "kill rat", and it worked. Similarly, with the door braces, I tried to pry with the tire iron, but in the end it was the hammer instead.

A humorous bit when I picked up the baseball bat, it dropped the tire iron automatically, saying I couldn't have both. But then I was able to simply pick the tire iron back up again.

Finally, I had all five pieces of trash, and one by one, I put them in the composter. Then I tried to give it to Ronnie, and he said there was nothing in it. When I tried adding the items again, it just said they were already in there. And oddly enough, when I checked the composter's contents, it just said there were some eggs, weighing 0 grams. :) Needless to say, I'm stuck due to some programming flaw. But it was fun while it lasted

Comment Jeremy5
04 Jun 2012
i can only find 4 pieces of trash in the kitchen for the composter then i put my water bottle in it and it says im done but ronnie says theres only 4???

Comment abe darkk
07 Mar 2012
hey man canyou please help me pretty please

Comment abe darkk
03 Mar 2012
i really am stuck can enyone help me ive done the compost bit but now what. help please

Review abe darkk
02 Mar 2012
im stuck what do you do after you do the garbage compost bit

Comment abe darkk
02 Mar 2012
doesnt matter

Comment abe darkk
02 Mar 2012
how do u talk to ronnie pillner

Comment sgreig
15 Feb 2012
It's intriguing so far... but some of the puzzles are very obscure. For example, I can't figure out what I'm supposed to type in to remove the door braces, and I can't seem to use any of my items on them.

Comment joshua3
03 Feb 2012
All Five are in the kitchen.

Comment Epicazeroth
26 Jan 2012
How can I get 5 trash pieces?

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