The Nebula by adrao

Comment aeirvx

I was really enjoying this game, saved it, left, and came back with no way to reload the save. How do I reload my save?

Comment Za;\lgoSo\

It's so awesome^^

Review Za;\lgoSo\

The storyline is amazing because of its rather in depth^^

Review Forgewright

Played about 40 pages into the game and had no issues technically. I was impressed with the writing of the story and the choices given. A fun game and quickly draws you into the action. You should be proud of your efforts as I'm sure it took a lot of work.

Comment DuckHudson

Too big, nothing loaded. The game could be great, but I don't know, because I can't fucking open past the character screen.

Comment paravantis

You may want to spellcheck your story. For instance, I found "STRENGHT" which should be edited to STRENGTH.

Comment DarkLizerd

Well, I guess I'm to finish my life as a mining slave...
Not too bad, well written (except for the typos)
Interesting story being developed here!

Comment Alexandre Torres

I really liked the game, I and think the idea was great, perhaps needing some development. The game is not yet complete, so I will place some observations with minimum spoilers:
1. It is not nice to make the decisions of the first part of the game determine the entire game. It is even worse to make the player have to discard the savegame and restart just because he picked the wrong place to go. If you want to make a game that kills the player, ok, it may be nice, but don´t kill his savegame.
2. The destination options is absurd! sometimes we can pick in the map, sometimes not. Sometimes we are just kicked out of a system before we want. This is IRRITATING. Is this your goal?
3. There is a bug that makes it impossible to go beyond 7 on score.
4. Sometimes there is a message error about not having script in the page.
5. It would be cool if the game offered an option to the player to join the rebellion against the empire. I mean, what about alternate endings? Also, it is unclear the strategy of the guys at the (SPOILER AVOIDED) System ... wait an year for what? and the moon base has just a pub.
6. A score button is needed so that I can see the evolution of my player.
7. I think that a good game should only require restart if the player wants to pick a distinct path, see easter eggs, or develop the skills in a distinct fashion. The worst thing is have to guess that you reached a dead end.

Review Marinirani

One of the biggest Text Adventures I've seen, and you never know if you'll die, so you're constantly on your toes. Thrilling and endlessly deep, I salute you.

Review Hubble315

This game is awesome. My only concern is that some planets have very little places to explore, like Aldeon prime. I like the level of detail that goes into ships, and how you have various officers that you can talk to. This is probably one of the best games on this website, and that is saying a lot.

Comment Hubble315

For some reason, it will not let me finish. It says my session has expired. Does anyone else know what that means? But so far, this has been the best game I have found.

Comment Naeemah

Finished the game, for me there luckily were no errors with any links. The first time I played I got stuck having missed most of the clues. The second time I tried other (obviously better :D) choices and finally picked up the scent.
Overall I think it is a very fair game and I liked that your crew gives advice whether they think something is a good idea or a very bad one so you don't have to guess for yourself. I would recommend saving before exploring any new star system nonetheless.

Thank you for creating this highly enjoyable game!

Review AwsomeSawsome

I just couldn't finish it (had no idea where to go next) but I played it extensively before that, and, honestly, the quality is exceptional. Other than a few typos, the writing is excellent. The quality is good enough that I could see this being on Steam.

Review Lonewolf7

Very good so far. I ran into a bugged choice, but i restarted it a few times and it worked.

Review CommanderMichael

Well crafted, with equal parts mystery, intrigue, and action; but sometimes the choices don't work.
They go black and remain unclickable, which is why I give 4 stars instead of 5, since having to restart every time this happens is tiresome.

Otherwise, the quality is exemplary.

Comment CommanderMichael

I can see that this had a lot of time and effort put into it, from the names, the "ethnic groups" of different humans, and all the locations, but I have one complaint.

Some of the links don't work, the hyperlink goes black like it's regular text. It's especially prominent when there's only one option, like: "Disappointed that you couldn't find anything, you return to your ship" and so on.

Basically, it's not a quality error, it's a technical one, but it's getting bothersome having to start at the beginning EVERY TIME THIS HAPPENS.

Review ejm29

The best ive played. A great game with many alternative paths, griping stories and a big thrilling universe. A must play!

Review AlDaBeast

A great example of using the storybook mechanics to create an immersive, and open-world (Galaxy) game. A lot of time, though, and effort have obviously been put into this game. As it is only at v0.5, I will defiantly keep on track of new updates. Overall, I had a blast playing this.