Death by Silence by DemiDevil

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Quest Gamebook
Hello this is Demi-Devil thank you for trying out my game, Death by Silence is a dark fantasy modern chose your own adventure kind of game. Do note though this game is my first so its more of me experimenting and trying stuff out then it is a full on game. Based on that I will be releasing it unfinished and updating it as I go because the main thing I am looking for is feedback I think this would be the best way to make me a better author of text games.
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Review blockwizard
14 Jun 2016
meh its ok but its kinda to hard and not very compelling
Comment XanMag
14 Jun 2016
Feedback: you really must improve punctuation. I had a hard time reading it with the run-ons and misplaced commas. Read it out loud. If you pause, there probably should be a comma or period there. If not, likely there shouldn't. I do like that there are multiple choices. A lot of games don't have that and are far too linear.
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DemiDevil
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Quest Gamebook 5.5
English
Added 07 Jun 2016
Updated 07 Jun 2016

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