It was very well-written, although there's not much to do besides follow the laid out path. The ending is a bit confusing, like the other reviewer said. I'm not sure if there's something to do during the final scene, or if it's just unfinished, but it leaves something to be desired. In this case, the abrupt ending is not the greatest.
That was, certainly interesting. The ending was really weird and unexpected. I don't know if I did something wrong and got a bad ending or something, but I felt it was a bit too short.