“The Jewels of Revelations” has tons of incredible descriptive writing and long paragraphs, so it requires your full attention. I recommend writing down some notes if you need help remembering what to choose later on. All of the paths are very interesting and unique. I went back four times to see more endings because I was so invested. The images are useful to the story, making it easier to imagine you are in it. I would read it on my own time if the writing was more broken up. Definitely recommend!
there are super good descriptions throughout this whole game. It's captivating and unique! I don't have much to say about improvements because this game is FANTASTIC. I would 100% play again and definitely recommend that people play this game!