Creation Cycle Project: Human by reinapepiada

Comment DaNiX88

In addition to my review, I wanted to add that I really enjoyed the format of the story and that the artwork was great and fitting for the dazzle of the described setting.

I want to encourage you, the author, to continue to write more stories like this, as I look forward to playing them! If you can, updating this game with the suggestions would also be awesome!

Keep up the good work!

Review DaNiX88

There is one thing that really irks me about this story: Why the memes? They really take away from what this story is approaching to be, in my opinion. That aside, I thing that there is a lot of potential with this work and I enjoyed traveling through many of its offered choices, many leading to the same outcome, but coming to different endings. I like the ability to restart, but I feel that the game should have a conclusion somehow. It feels unfinished ー or rather, incomplete. If only there was an option (of if there is, more easily found?) that brings a conclusion to this interesting plot, I could rate this fun, albeit short game a 5 (though with the memes, I would definitely take the rating down no matter what the case).

Long story short, take out the memes and add a reachable ending where the player can reflect upon all of their past choices in the game and can grasp an overall meaning (possibly similar to the "finding the girl with the surgical mask" ending?); or simply take out the never-ending "Try Again" link on every "Game Over."

Comment XanMag

I don't know what to think of this honestly. Creative? Sure. Engaging? Not so much. Worth playing? Hmmm... give it a try I guess. Deeply Philosophical? I'm not so sure, but the effort is nice enough.

Overall, I appreciate the effort and thought put into this short "game", but it is far too linear for my liking.

Happy Gaming!
XanMag