Prisoner Life by BeggerStager

I do not know what life as a prisoner is, so the conceptions told in this story may be misleading. Just something I wanted to do for fun.

When you die, you aren't really supposed to die. I lost motivation so I ended the story where it was. If there are positive comments / ratings, I'll add more. Otherwise, I'll make another one.

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Review Shadow Omega Wolf

22 Nov 2015

I'm starting to like this

Review Ashanti_Mckin

21 Jul 2015

Most of my game's links are broken. How do I pass Day 2 without a link? I want to play

Comment umbreonlover

28 May 2015

i have won... i think

Comment dom1310df

10 Jan 2015

A very good start. Keep it up!

Comment Odie_da_Bossé

10 Jan 2015

I will review this when it is finished.

Great game! I like simple games. The writing is well distributed. It makes it easy and fun to play. Of course, I have some things you should include in your game.

Make sure that you get a colour scheme. Just makes it look colourful. However, don't go TOO colourful, otherwise the simpleness of the game gets ruined. A light blue or light grey backdrop would suit the game perfectly.

And please explain, how'd you end up in prison in the first place? Write an introduction on it. Unless you want to keep it a secret, build the plot up as you go along, and reveal it in game. A simple game like this should have it in an intro, a very basic plot; maybe a paragraph, or even two, but never over the top.

Well done. Will review this in future. This would be about 4 stars so far (your reviews from other people are very appropriate), so keep at it. Happy game making!

Comment BeggerStager

10 Jan 2015

The game has been UPDATED. You can now escape! Exciting isn't it?

However, I'm still working on day two, but you can still explore the options I've added. :)

Comment BeggerStager

09 Jan 2015

It's too bad you can't change your review. Or can you? I don't know.

Working on it. Thanks for the motivational comments / reviews.

Review ToThisDay

09 Jan 2015

Very good work! Please update ASAP!

Review AndyCLive

08 Jan 2015

Good, but you must continue it. It's very nice, but too short.

Comment ejm29

07 Jan 2015

This would be good. But I can't give it a good rating, as you have not finished it. I'll give it four star's if you continue it.

Comment BeggerStager

06 Jan 2015

So far, this game has gotten a good review. I'll update a version where you can escape if there are 4 more reviews. If the average is 3 stars and above, then I'll expand the story line.

Review zbullock

06 Jan 2015

An entertaining set of choices. I have failed to "win" yet.