I loved the story. It was highly atmospheric and had both qualities of realism and the potential of fantasy. Now, this is not all I meant by atmospheric, but my temperature did drop a degree, reading it, unless that was my imagination.
It was a nice length, not too long, and never boring.
I had never read this kind of story online, until now. The only choose-your-own adventure stories I had read were paper. This was nice, because there is a different colour for already chosen links, and I was able to go back and read the other versions of the story.