Honestly, it's not a bad attempt, but I do feel it's lacking in writing, and some objects are literally useless and have no purpose, there is no description as to how you enter her rectum, you simply enter, it really doesn't serve any purpose to read a vore story if the vore isn't even described, yet I see you put an effort into this so that player could interact with the npc in many ways, yet the digest slightly command doesn't work, all in all, it's not a bad start, but it requires some real heavy work for you, try writing more and describing the scenes so I can actually give this some nice stars
