Really good stuff. I’m not educated in writing so I’m not gonna say anything fancy or technical. My only two complaints are that 1) (big) money isnt in the game (im sure this is a byproduct of being unfinished) and 2) (this is more of a nitpick) all of the characters are female. Its the type of thing you only realize on a second playthrough, and its far from a gamebreaking detail. Overall really well written, and very enjoyable. Easily a 9/10, maybe even a 10/10. Looking forward to any updates that may come (I really want big people money!)
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