This is a good start! It tells me about how the game is going to go, what's going to happen. things like that. You give the player a good idea of what's to come. The only thing I would ask for is more choices, such as "Watch the tv", or "Choose who should die: Jessica, or Erick". Remember, no one truly cares if a person who is dead is reanimated! As long as you give a recap of the previous "episode," you're fine!
