It's an interesting game, though I feel like it better suits a younger audience. Felt as if I was reading a book a child would read, like around 11 or 12. If your goal is an older audience I would suggest working on your vocabulary and phrasing.
this definitely doesn't count as a game in my opinion, so if you're looking for a game you should pass this one up. I wouldn't even count this as interactive fiction, and if that was the authors goal, they have a very very limited idea of what 'interactive' means. this is basically just a 'read my story and press the button to read the next part.' type thing here.
