This game is short, with many typos and grammatical errors. There are only, like, 5 rooms in this game. If you want something short with little action and few puzzles, download this. If you're normal, don't.
The storyline was good, but there were quite a few typos and text that kept away the feeling of "immersion". Nice idea, though (a bit too much like "Fade to White", but that's okay).
I agree with the previous review--however, I have one bone to pick with this game (I would bump my rating up to 5 if this weren't so.) I don't know if it is a problem with the download link or something with my computer or what, but apparently I downloaded a demo or obsolete version. The version was marked "alpha" and when I reached a certain point in the game, the game displayed: PART 2: (blah blah) END OF DEMO Wha?