Now I personally really like this! I can see this becoming something really really good. Just keep on improving and adding more things like you did with the friend and all. Although I personally would like more moments where your willingly eaten but that's just me! Looking forward to your next updates!
Good stuff all around in my opinion! Theres still stuff that needs work done in it but over all im impressed! It sorta reminds me of one I think is called shrukenvill or something- im sure someone will correct me but none the less. I cant wait to see how this story unfolds.
