This is excellent! You've done a great job. I have to confess, the scenario had me pretty bewildered at first, but you wrote in a way that helped clearly explain what was going on and I ended up enjoying it a lot. It was a very interesting play that left me curious for more!
This is looking awesome! The music fits quite well and your writing does a great job in painting the scene. I also appreciated the Lake Michigan shoutout! :D
Interesting characters and great writing! Some very detailed and enticing scenarios here. You clearly have a very talented group of friends and you have written some truly great content! I enjoyed it very much!
Interesting! It seemed like there were no good endings... In all the endings, I was just working with jerks. It was just like real life. D: Lol. That being said, a fun little game that I restarted a bunch of times!
