Pretty good however it can be a bit confusing, it says gorse tail is deaf right? But you clearly hear what other cats are saying, though it’s pretty good despite that, my ending was murder but happy
A good, simple looking story <) I like it! Hope you continue, however it’s a lot like warriors but it’s still a pretty nice and seems to have a lot of potential, hope you continue!
This is probably the best warrior text adventures ever played! The story is interesting,
It’s written very well,
I like how characters call you “hun”
And I think it isn’t too short, I applaud you and hope you work on it more!
I honestly think it’s well written and I like the name Cedarclaw BUT I do think there should be more options. since it’s a wip I’m sure you’ll have more options as you continue but I think you should open with more options, other than that I will say it’s written very well and I like the idea!
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