Cute game! I think it has lots of potential, just bummed out and wish it had been updated lately </3 (at least this was made in 2021!)
If you'd be so kind please check out my own game! I would really appreciate it! :)
http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/qbheiqjcvukkxc6l0rdhxa/warrior-cats-dawns-horizon
1. Why doesn't "Midnight" have a warriors name? She could have clearly been called "Nightshadow" or "Nightjay", ect. Her having been named "Midnight" doesn't make sense unless she was a former rogue/loner and joined Thunderclan
2. Why can she swim? Thunderclan cats know NOTHING about how to swim?
3. Heartheart isn't a warriors name. You just repeated Heart twice (i thought it said Heatherheart the first time i read it, which would of been ok!) I don't mean to be rude but did you have zero idea what to call her and just decided "Heartheart sounds good! No one will make a fuss about it"?
4. Flipfeather "did what Tigerstar did to his "mates""??? I have no idea what that's supposed to mean, as I haven't read the books in a while but. what???
In conclusion: This game is still confusing, even with the "explaining" at the end. The grammar is OKAY but its short and again, very confusing. If you've read through this or scrolled to the bottom, thanks! Why don't you try out the WIP game I'm making if you want to support?
https://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/qbheiqjcvukkxc6l0rdhxa/warrior-cats-dawns-horizon
