You should make a book or sometihng like it, i mean, this story is spooky and work but the player don't make choices, don't resolve puzzle, it's not a textgame it's just... a text. uh... But you are good in tell sotries, just remember to make games too.
I love that, it's a fantastic story, and the way you chose to tell it's very diferent, it's one of my favorites text games!
É engraçado, eu dou 4 por rir muito mesmo.
ok, OK! E muito simples, e tem alguns momentos que voce so tem uma escolha a fazer, mas e engracado!