It's a very promising game, and I would like to see more content put on it, like more ways to interact with things, like choosing if I want to go to the girl's butt instead of the front,or if want to climb them and etc
My only problem is how the game is too vague sometimes, adding more description to some interactions can be very helpful
The idea is good, but the light system should be reworked, as a lot of times my light literally just died 1 movement after I recharged. Other thing that should be botted in this light system, is how it's not supported by textadventure's system, as sometimes the light goes out in the hallway, and when I try to recharge the torch, the game simply doesn't let me, as it keeps opening my cellphone's keyboard, giving me a free game over.
Other thing to mention, is that you should give the characters a new age, as the game literally have 2 minors, the protag, and the young sister (Wich probably have 10 -12 years, Wich is pretty fucked up), this is practically pedo bullshit, and the main reason I'm giving 1 star, if this wasn't on the game, I would give it 3/4 stars.
You probably gave up on the game, but still, doesn't hurt to criticize it
The game have a good idea, one that could easily make it replayable and fun
But, the game doesn't do that, with this battery system, it really fucked up your game, as you need to go back all the way to the start (as the torch just soft locks the player)
What could make it better, is if instead of the player being so dependant of the torch, he could actually play without it, but obviously, being harder
