Hyphenzilla

Review for Day Of A Tiny Student

Pretty good so far. It seems currently like there’s a lot to fill up. One thing I’d like to see though is some more unaware vore endings.

Review for A weekend Alone Neil's adventure

This is pretty great! I’m really liking this so far. As someone who likes the comic and unaware vore, given that the amount of that here is way more than in the comic, which is great, I definitely enjoy this, especially with the recent update.

However, I do agree with HighImpactMoth that the deaths could use some more detail to really bring them out, and a walkthrough or map would only be beneficial.

Those unfinished areas in the story look like they have a lot of potential, can’t wait to see those get added to. One thing of my own that I think will help is: in the comic, for the unaware vore scenes, in a few instances the victims survive and get out. So if you could add a survival option to some of your current or future unaware vore scenes, I think it would definitely help with the story.