Technically impressive game. Lots of very interesting ideas and pushing the system in all sorts of interesting ways. If you are thinking of authoring a story looking at this one for ideas about what you can do in this sphere. It is still a work in progress and the story and gameplay would benefit from some polishing but that takes nothing away from a fantastic achievement that should be an inspiration to all.
Solid ideas here. If it ever gets finished enough to work as more of a game it could be really quite something for achieving the discussions it is obvious designed to prompt.