LordSparky

Review for Star fall

Wow I arrested the right guy on the second attempt. These are good. You should have a go at writing an epic script with loads of content that keeps the game play going for dome time.

Review for Trapped in the deep

This is great! Some real imaginative ideas and I enjoyed reading. Had to play a couple of times as I seemed to make the wrong choices often and died. But please do keep writing and expand the options so that the adventure continues for longer. Overall great effort but I want more!