Wow I arrested the right guy on the second attempt. These are good. You should have a go at writing an epic script with loads of content that keeps the game play going for dome time.
This is great! Some real imaginative ideas and I enjoyed reading. Had to play a couple of times as I seemed to make the wrong choices often and died. But please do keep writing and expand the options so that the adventure continues for longer. Overall great effort but I want more!