Scattered Ambitions

Review for Can You Successfully Reenter without Revocation?

It's not finished, but what you have so far is good.

Review for Fatal Island Part 2

It was good but ended quite abruptly. There was only one way I found to survive, so maybe if I had played longer, it would have gone on longer. The description was good, and I liked the story. It was interesting how you had the reader feel bad when they left the people behind. Overall, I quite liked it, btu there are some things you could change.