I personally love comedic blandness and incoherence, and it was a little dark, too (I like dark humour).
I guess that not many people would either understand how you're trying to be funny or simply find that kind of thing funny (from my experience), but I really liked it!
It did seem like some stuff were accidental errors (like "a the surgery machine", although it would be funny to me if you consistently and deliberately made that error). By the way, "surgery machine" was probably my favorite object.
The game was weak to me, though. I love that style, but I would really like to see it played out more extremely!
