It may be because I'm a youngster, and haven't seen so much yet, but I doubt it. I really doubt it.
This is disturbing and dystopian. This is rich, great and terrible, a tale that takes place in the far future of a wreck on two feet (this is You) who like many others will raise a horse to enter in a contest. There is one winner. You win everything, or lose everything.
Do as much as you can in 20 days; make sure your horse's stats are well-rounded, and don't forget to take care of yourself in the rush for becoming a Horse Master.
I'm quite excited to see where this goes! There are minimum grammatical errors, nicely thought out characters, and a neodymium mine of potential. Best of luck on the next chapter and all that may follow!
