A nice short game, with several meaningful choices, and naturally several ways to die. I like how a lethally wrong choice might not lead to your death right away, instead letting you explore a bit more before you die. The game's short length also does it some favors, since it makes replaying it after dying much less disheartening. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there, but the game still feels quite solid.
It was alright. I liked the options for the items. A bit short, though. But it seems you have just scratched the surface, so I hope you keep improving!